Thank you for your thoughtful comment.

I'm happy it all makes sense to you, especially since the rules of the universe are pretty much all mine (there's no stand-by bodies, fleshing or connect on the show).

I put a lot of thought into the scene with Donna, so it's great to hear it resonated with you. And I'm glad you're mentioning Loretta because I like her a lot, and it was fun writing her.