This fic was just wonderful. I've never seen 'Dead like me', so I was completely dependent on you for the descriptions. And you did great world-building there, as everything made sense to me. Since the unraveling (for a lack of a better word) of the world was through Jared's eyes, the information seemed a natural part of Jared's learning instead of an info-dump.
Jensen's enigmatic and mysterious quality was very enjoyable and that made his secret all the more tragic when it was revealed. The scene at Jensen's house between Jared, Jensen and Donna was beautiful. Loretta made an interesting, lovable matriarch type of person.
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Date: 2010-08-19 05:44 am (UTC)Jensen's enigmatic and mysterious quality was very enjoyable and that made his secret all the more tragic when it was revealed. The scene at Jensen's house between Jared, Jensen and Donna was beautiful. Loretta made an interesting, lovable matriarch type of person.
I thoroughly enjoyed this.