Ohhhhhh bb. This was wonderful. Like I've said in other comments and emails, I was pulled right in with your narration and how light it was, but then when it got heavy, there was great respect in those moments. Like Loretta with the little girl, or the very end of Part Three and the beginning of Part Four. There was tension when it was supposed to be there, laughter and joy and excitement, and cranky Jensen! Who can't love all that!
Also, I think I've only ever cried in one other story ever, so you know, you've got that going for you.
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Date: 2010-08-18 09:41 pm (UTC)Also, I think I've only ever cried in one other story ever, so you know, you've got that going for you.
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